Thanks for the catch!

I'll take care of those this afternoon!

Golems
Golems must be constructed in such a manor as to be able to move
manner
God,waiting for book 2 and second edition of book 1 is pure torture

Yes,it is on the site library. Good to know about 2nd edition pretty much concetrating on the picture.
I was way too excited for the second edition(hooked so badly on this, I might need to go to rehab).
Heh, good to know that I`m not the only lazy author out there(when I was one, it was for a FF, but the original story paid 0 attention on magicians even though the MC was one and I didn`t feel like making stuff up while the author would most likely go a totally different direction). I don`t really proofread books that I read since it would only frustrate me,they`re usually long(I generally don`t read short books), I usually don`t have any way to contact the author without too much hassle and I am not sure enough about my English to tell somebody their grammar mistakes(I am absolutely horrendrous with present perfect, not sure why).

Sorry about the wall of text

Thanks for the corrections on the site it's very helpful!

The Jötnar ones are actually new, freshly written live yesterday based on back story for book 2. So that's what I'd call a "live" error.

Most of the other errors you might see on the site are things that have been around for quite some while and have been migrated multiple times to various formats and are things I've read so many times, I am no longer even capable of seeing the errors.

A lot of the library was in Ami Pro, then Lotus Word Pro, then in html on the original www.astlan.COM site (that I failed to renew fast enough and it got stolen by squatters that want multiple kilodollars to get it back) which was a FrontPage website and from there it went to Word DOC and then Word DOCX and now into DNN.

Uhm...maybe it was an example of a mistake?



Yeah, that's what it is, an example of a mistake.

Congratulations! You are the first person to spot that and are thus entitled to a prize.

How about a day trip to Hell Springs Eternal for a nice lava bath?

You are starting to sound just like Talarius...

"I don't want to go in the lava!"

"Don't throw me in the lava!"

"It's too hot!"

What a crybaby!

Of course it's hot! It's the heat that soothes the muscles eating away at the stress, tension and flesh....

Cool! or Hot, gotta sign in red though.

BTW once the beta is done we are all going to go party at Hell Springs Eternal --soothing lava baths and on the house massages from Grzzaazztquactl, she is wonderful, her 12" claws can really get between your muscle fibers and open them up!

I don't know if, strictly speaking, this is a mistake but...

Roy G. Biv

Red - 1st order demon
Orange - 2nd Order Demon
Yellow - 3rd Order Demon
Green - 4th Order (Greater Demon)
Blue - 5th Order (Arch Demon)
Indigo - 6th Order (Demon Prince)
Violet - 7th Order (Demon Emperor)

Technically I suppose there is also a infrared and ultraviolet since they are parts of the spectrum, but they aren't really relevant.

Anyway in the book the author writes:

"... There was one light blue light with a slight turquoise tinge and two rather dark blues. There might be more, but there were at least three. Three Archaedemons! In one place! At one time! Talarius prayed. He prayed deeply and sincerely. He prayed that this test might not fall upon his shoulders. A challenge of one Archaedemon he'd foolishly looked forward to. But three at once! Talarius had never known fear, at least not of anything physical or tangible, and he didn't believe that was what he felt now. Trepidation might be the word. Whatever it was, Talarius did not enjoy it. "

As you can see from the chart blue and spectrum I've included, there was actually only one arch demon. The two rather Dark Blues would count as Indigo and would therefor be Demon Princes.

Excellent observation!

I like using Roy. T-A-G wasn't specifically thinking of Roy when describing things. In fact he never made the exact correlation that you did, which fits quite nicely.

He should have, he did spend quite a bit of time studying astronomy and optics....

I am not so sure how much of it is Talarius bad interpretation of the mirror results and communication.

Talarius didn't make the mirror, he'd just acquired it, and my guess is that he knew in principle how it worked. I am betting he'd never seen anything bigger than a greater demon in it. Maybe a lesser archdemon.

I would think Lenamare or Damien would have given a much more accurate/precise description of the colors the same way you do. But Talarius is basically a warrior and color subtleties are probably not his strong point.

We also have some questions about who was where at the time of the viewing.

Those questions, I think you will find get even more complicated in Book II. It all ties into the other discussions about the mirror and colors that have gone on in other threads.